Micheline Aharonian Marcom reads from her new novel tonight at Elliott Bay Books at 7:30 pm, at 101 South Main Street.
When we first wandered over to the Seattlest Arts Desk to pick up our review copy of Draining the Sea, we'd never heard of Micheline Aharonian Marcom. Turns out this Saudi-born, LA-raised child of an American and a Lebanese-Armenian is the author of two critically acclaimed earlier novels: Three Apples Fell From Heaven and The Daydreaming Boy. Who knew? Back in 2001, reviewing Three Apples in the New York Times, Margot Livesey wrote that, "The fierce beauty of her prose both confronts readers with many breathtaking cruelties and carries us past them." Such a description recalls the Cormac McCarthy of Blood Meridian, in which endless passages describe the breathtaking natural beauty of the Southwest with such vivid intensity that the reader is easily dragged into the booby-trap of McCarthy's brutally twisted violence (baby tree, anyone?). Unfortunately, to judge Marcom by Draining the Sea, it would seem that Livesey's observation is as much a prescription for long slog of a read as for a literary masterpiece.
One need only crack a copy of Draining the Sea to discover that Marcom's style is dense and darkly lyrical. The narrator inhabits a phantasmagorical Los Angeles, where he spends his days collecting the carcasses of dead dogs off the roads and grappling with his memories of the Guatemalan civil war and Marta, a woman he both loved and likely killed, as well as his family's experience of the Armenian genocide (this is Marcom's central theme through all her books, apparently). Written in a hallucinatory stream-of-consciousness, Marcom's prose twists and turns poetically. Take, for instance, this single sentence:
This is my inquiry, an inquisition of the air: you say that you cannot be undone, and you say (with your looking) that I am a beast of clean proportions; you say nothing with your words, in fact you have no words in my language (and I none in yours) and you insist in your dark cold chambers, in the capital of darkness, you bring me there, into the pit with you, with the other handless corpses, the half-deads, the unclosed eyes of the dying: you, the rats and diptera girls, and faceless cockless boys, and black bowed beetles, and intrepid moths on your skin eyelids—that I stay with you in that place, that I take up your hands (beautiful veins of indifference) and bundle that unringed, unpainted fingers fingernails to your mother in the Highlands: to your dead mother, the dead brothers and father, the crucified brother, who beat each other in the winters and for whom hunger is like an iron fist: send them these artifacts of the body, you say; rescue me from this hole, this hollow they've made for the half-deads, and I am crying uncontrollably now at the side of the freeway, and I can't see you amidst the piles and it is you and then it is my mother giving me her five phrases about the Armenian grandmother when I am a boy, and the long distances between home and here, and then it is me, alone in my car, driving along the 405.
On the one hand, this is an act of literary bravura, a sentence constructed with a poet's sense of flow and a technician's precision, that unfolds and blossoms like a flower bud, as layer upon layer of language opens up. There's three parenthetical phrases, three colons, and two semi-colons in one sentence. An impressive feat all around. On the other hand, it's nearly meaningless. What are "beautiful veins of indifference" or "skin eyelids" besides pretty phrases? And perhaps most problematically for a first-person narrative, who on earth would talk like that, let alone think like that?
Still, accusing a book of obscurantism and aloofness is an easy bomb to lob, and we found ourselves reconsidering leaving our review at that, once we read Irene Wanner's piece this morning in The Seattle Times. "Day by day, as I slogged through my appointed pages," writes Wanner, "I became increasingly frustrated. How could Marcom indulge herself with such language? She had received several of the writing world's juiciest plums — a Lannan Literary Fellowship, a PEN USA Literary Award for Fiction, a Whiting Writers' Award — yet this book circled on and on and on ... to what purpose?"
That's not just unfair, it's lacking in subtlety. Yes, the prose is obscure and dense, but it's not a simple stylistic choice as Wanner seems to imply. In fact, for the genre, this is par for the course; there are rules to writing witness literature, and Marcom—to her detriment, in fact—is playing by the rules.
As the above passage makes patently clear, the purpose for this seemingly impenetrable stream-of-consciousness is its ability to collapse time and space. In one single, strung-out sentence, we flow from LA's super-highways through a Guatemalan Indian's homeland, all the way back to the inherited memory of the genocide. The effect is to make the historically and geographically distant immediate and personal. As a device, its purpose is just the same (and just as central to the author's project) as Jonathan Safran Foer's use of multiple layers of narrative in Everything is Illuminated (about the Holocaust) and Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close (about Sept. 11). But Foer's internal narratives, through which we in the present experience the past, leave these psychically traumatic events safely contextualized, first by the nature of being in the past, and then, as the narrative takes on its surreal qualities and the boundaries between past and present blur, by the awareness of the fictive nature of the device.
We doubt that Marcom's book is going to stand the test of time to become a classic, or even, for that matter, garnish much attention from the media. But while she may have weaknesses and pretensions, the project of Draining the Sea is ambitious, and she deserves at least credit for that. This being the third novel in a projected trilogy about the Armenian genocide and its aftermath, perhaps she can now move on to new subjects for which her considerable gifts are suited, and manage to write a truly great novel.

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